[Chimamire Yashiki (Gachonjirou)] Game Tomodachi no Onnanoko to Onsen Ryokou de Yaru Hanashi NTR+ ALTERNATIVE FANMADE VERSION [English] [TensaZangetsu1234]

AI slop, keep it to yourself next time.

If anyone's interested, I originally intended to make more, but it would have been an entirely AI-generated sequels. I've made some ilustrations showing their daily life together, their wedding night, a vacation, and finally, all characters together with their childrens(2 boys and 1 girl). I also made a side chapter where Mari have sex with those guys in fantasy adveture VR game, but despite some good illustrations, the quality of the whole thing was poor, so I abandoned the idea of ​​​​publishing it. If the original author doesn't create any more stories with Mari featuring those guys, and AI quality improves by then, maybe I’ll make another attempt.

Despite the negative comments—which are, of course, understandable(from those who dislike alternative storylines, as well as those who dislike AI) my little fanmade verson made it to the front page of all time popularity in gachonjirou tag. This clearly indicates that I wasn't the only one who wanted to see a scenario where Mari goes all-out into NTR and chooses to have relationship with guys from the hot springs. This is the sort of thing that usually happens at the end of NTR doujins, but the original author decided to make Mari a character who cheats on her boyfriend with many different people, so it’s hard to expect any kind of definitive conclusion to this story, at least at this point.

Why the fuck are some people trying to remove the artist tag? You dimwits DO know the unofficial AI shit only starts with the textless, color pages, right? Everything else was still made by the original, HUMAN artist!

Why the fuck is shit like this being allowed here? Someone just took a random doujinshi and added garbage AI pages

Fucking AI shit

Of course the real cucks come here just to say they don't like NTR... I mean why, man? Your voice is not that important to begin with. Why do you think your opinion that matter, lol.

Need sequel asap

不能理解的就是男主又不是没有满足女主，这女主还能继续找这两个男的做吗？单纯的性爱上瘾吗？

"Fanmade" and I never saw worst rewriting, even for a hentai. Let's be real, that person just hate male MC. The 2 routes were already stupid to begin with..

@justbekind I just wish this stuff didnt appear in my feed at all since I have it blacklisted. I get that they added the feature to vote tags but it isnt fast enough for me. Honestly just seeing NTR is a turn off for me. I dont care if it makes me some kind of snowflake. NTR makes me depressed.

>NTR in the title >bitches in the comments whining about it being NTR Tale as old as time.

Its fanmade so its not Canon stfu even if its ai better yet y tf are u reading it in the first place if u already took 1 look of it and start accusing its ai if u know from the first look just go to a different doujin or smth

tbf The previous works were better without this shit going on. I get that some people get off to NTR for some reason, but some of us get off to the more wholesome stories. This WAS one of them. Now it's just objectionable.

AI huh. actually stupid this is reportable

Yeah no. I’m going to act like, "Oh my God, this betrays the story and the characters," because, anyway, you could argue that was already partly the case with the NTR route. So, a rewrite, why not? Besides, it's just porn. I mean, I like to imagine Mari has a twin sister so I don't feel guilty about the NTR+ version. But generative AI, besides making it ugly, I just can't. It's a cancer for hentai and pretty much everything on the internet. I hope you'll find a way to do it without using it next time, OP.

So much whining lmao.

NTRtards should be subjected to scaphism

The characters betray their personalities from the original works, which leaves this rewrite dead in the water in my eyes. Unlike the Tachibana family rewrite (shoutout old heads who remember before it was nuked), there isn't even comedy to redeem this rewrite outside of the context of jacking off. But there's a level of passion here that I see and respect, even in using AI to envision the happy ending. I'll be curious to see if this guy ever does more work and if they drastically improve, I believe in them

Somebody explain what blud is wafflin' bout.

I wish I could blow up the phones or monitors of everyone that faps to this series. They should writhe in pain with glass shards in their eyes. I usually just scroll past NTR but this garbage just sets me off for some reason. It's just so next level revolting. Guro and snuff enjoyers are less gross than NTR fans.

i'm gonna vomit fuck. this is fucking gross.

Too short....

Wait, am i drunk before reading this???

What the hell is this?

It's ur own fault dude, games over babes. . . SMH. Ofc u lose the girl!

Son are we deadass